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Nouvelles gagnantes des élèves de 2des de Mme Bentolila

Par YANNICK GUILLET, publié le mardi 28 février 2017 18:04 - Mis à jour le mercredi 5 juillet 2017 19:41

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Louise

Marine

Matthieu

 

It all started when a young couple, James and Bonny, arrived at an orphanage to adopt a child. They found a lot of children playing in the playroom. No adult was present to supervise. The children were all playing except a little girl standing in the corner of the room. The couple asked her questions. She answered with a feeble voice: “There are only children here.”

    The couple decided to come back on the following day but there was still no adult around. The little girl gave them a drawing. The couple took it and when they saw what she had drawn, they were shocked.

    James and Bonny came every day but no one was taking care of the children. The little girl continued to give them drawings. The couple was more and more scared because the children were still alone and something strange seemed to be happening there. One day they decided to warn the police there was no adult in the orphanage but the inspector said the place was abandoned. The couple did not understand and went straight to the orphanage. When they arrived they discovered the children eating an old woman. She looked similar to the woman in the photo of the establishment. She was probably the head of the orphanage. The children were not human. They were tearing down her limbs.

    The little girl was hiding and crying behind a chest of drawers. The children had misshapen faces and were destroying their victim’ flesh. The couple took the little girl, ran and locked themselves up in a room, but the children broke the door and caught James. Bonny tried to hold him back, but unfortunately it was too late.

   Bonny and the little girl tried to escape but the children caught up with them. She tried to open the gate but it was closed. When Bonny tried to get out, the little girl was standing in front of her with all the children around. She was smiling…

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Anna

Léa

Solène

Spider scare

 

In the deep heart of Wyoming, three scientists called Madeleine, Danny and Dr Julian were working on spiders. They created genetically modified spiders because people killed them and there were only about one hundred left on the planet. Dr Julian wanted to save them and make them immortal. The laboratory was locked and under strict control. One night, the three scientists were working together making dangerous experiments.  Suddenly, spiders got out of their boxes. Madeleine screamed:

“Oh my god! Danny! Dr Julian! Catch them! They are invincible!”

 Madeleine ran after the spiders crawling on the floor.

“Wait, Madeline! We haven’t finished our work, so they are really resistant! They can kill you!” Dr Julian said.

She did not listen to what the doctor was saying and was looking for the spiders. Then she fell on the floor. Surprised, Dr Julian and Danny ran up to her and found Madeleine’s dead body. She had stopped breathing.

“Oh my god, is she dead?” Danny asked.

 “Yes, she is, Danny. What are we going to do?” Dr Julian wondered.

They took the body and brought it to a closed room. There were really scared and shocked.

“Oh god, we have to find the cure…”, Danny said.

“I’ve got it. But there is still a little problem, Danny….”

“Jesus… We are already having some problems!”

“The cure kills everybody and everything. There are too many spiders here, we’re really in danger. We have to make a sacrifice… I am sorry, Danny.”

Suddenly, Madeleine’s hand moved and caught Dr Julian’s arm. She woke up screaming and opened her eyes. But they were bloodshot and bigger than before. She bit Dr Julian and wanted to do the same thing on Danny. He ran away in a scream. Dr Julian was dead and Madeleine alive. It was incredible.

Danny was alone and had to find the cure. He scoured the place and finally found it. It was in a highly secured box. He took it into another room and locked the door. He placed the cure in the air conduct because he wanted to spread it – the poison – that way. Everything was ready and so was Danny. When he sent the poison, all the doors opened. Madeleine was there standing in front of the room. She jumped on Danny and bit him. Danny fell dead.

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Clémentine

 

The Brown Opportunity

 

Logan Mac Afferty was 26 year old an American man.

One day, he was contacted by the NASA for a secret mission on Pluto named The Brown Opportunity, whose aim was to discover a new life in space.

    After six months training in a secret base in the United States of America, Logan was ready to go to the space station next to Pluto. He was sent on his own on a Black rocket for a tree year long mission.

On the rocket,  Mr Milou, the BO commanding officer, talked to Logan and reminded him of the following: “On Pluto, you must find three things: water, any sign of life and a way to communicate with aliens if aliens be. Good luck, Logan.”

“Thank you, Sir.”, Logan said.

 Now he was on the brown planet, he looked for a trace of water with the help of a heat detector. He did so for two weeks and found nothing. Was there no water on Pluto? The planet had many creases. One day, Logan walked in the mountains to take pictures and did not notice there was a hole. He fell off the cliff and lost consciousness.

    Two hours later Logan woke up and saw a blue underground lake next to him. Logan was excited and happy. He had completed his mission! He took a picture of the beautiful scenery and took samples too to analyse in the station lab. Now he had two more things to find for Mr Milou.

    Logan had been working for two weeks trying to find a way to talk to the scientist. He built a transmitter with the metal and precious stones he had found on Pluto. Now it was impossible to communicate with Earth. He sent a message.

“Hello, Earth, Logan speaking. Can you hear me?”

“Hello, Logan, Dr Milou speaking. I can hear you ok.”, he said.

“Great, okay! I have found water and a way to communicate, but I haven’t found any sign of life on Pluto.”

“Good work. Keep digging, Logan.” Mr Milou asked.

“Okay, sir. I will do my best.”

“Sure, Logan, bye and good luck.”

Now he was alone, Logan had no idea as to how to find life on Pluto.

He walked around Pluto for about two days and found nothing. He decided to go to the underground lake to analyse the water and maybe find a sign of life….

    He took a few samples, analysed them and made scientific experiments. Logan found traces of bacteria and prehistoric animals! He was happy and it was now the end of the BO mission. He sent the latest analyses to Mr Milou. One day later, he was contacted by the scientist.

“Good job, Logan. You can return on Earth. Congratulations.”

“Thank you, sir.”

And Logan came back to Earth with a lot of memories. The Brown Opportunity mission had ended, but Pluto was still full of secrets.

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Aurore

Joylita

Lisa

Marine

 

The Aliens’ revenge

6000 years before, the Aliens had been invaded by humans from Earth. But now in 3021, they wanted to take revenge. They took a human appearance not to be seen and in order to become man’s friends. The humans trusted the aliens but the creatures did not have emotions except the prince of the aliens, who fell in love with Talia, a human.

    Cheston the prince rose up against his father because the kind wanted to kill the entire human race. So Cheston was helped by Biromi, his best friend and the king’s enemy.  In spite of his help, the rest of the aliens continued killing the humans. They used special weapons which made humans and all their things such as their homes, disappear.

    Therefore the Earth became empty and the dead people disappeared from the memory of the living. Only Talia noticed his family and other humans disappearing. The Earth was gradually emptying so the alien people could come in groups from their planet and invade the Earth. Talia was afraid and nobody saw it except Cheston. But she had a problem because she was keeping her human appearance.

    Cheston’s best friend was a druid and had a potion for Talia which could turn her into an alien. But still, there were human people alive and she wanted to save them so Talia gave the potion to the humans to save them. The king of the aliens decided to kill the woman because she ended up being the last woman on Earth. She died before the prince’s very eyes. He was really angry with his father and shot him with the aliens’ special weapons. Finally, Cheston became the new king of the aliens and decided to save all the humans. He became their friends in the memory of Talia his eternal love.  

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Abigaël

Elsa

Jeanne

  

A long time ago in a galaxy far far away, people from Toulouse had colonized a planet. This planet was special because it stood in a parallel universe and looked like Mars so the settlers called it Mars P. On the planet they discovered strange animals looking like marsupilamis, in other words, yellow monkeys with very long tails and black spots.  After a while, Mars chocolate bars and chocolate croissants fell off trees onto the ground. Their fruits came in pairs like cherries.

    Now in 2103 there was an extremely popular brownie maker in both universes and she was called Elizabeth Brown. Elizabeth, also known as Eli, was a small woman with long red curly hair. She made different brownies, flavoured chocolate croissants and Mars chocolate bars. Like any human living on Mars P., Eli has a red and black skin and lived in a chocolate bar tree. She liked rugby too, rugby being the world sport.

One day as the sun was shining, Eli was making other brownies. When it was hot, she brought some to her marsupilami. It seemed to like it and kept asking for more and more. After ten brownies, Elizabeth decided to stop and sold the other ones. Several days later, she noticed that brownies were disappearing mysteriously. Only her brownies. That was strange.

    As time went by, she had less and less customers until that day when a very special customer came. It was a marsupilami wearing human clothes and keeping a person on a lead as a pet. Even if the brownie maker was surprised, she smiled and did her job. When the marsupilami left the shop with its human who was walking on all fours like a monkey, Elizabeth left her counter and locked up the shop. 

    She stepped into the street and she could see the same phenomenon everywhere: marsupilamis with human clothes keeping their master on leads. The marsupilamis behaved like humans and waved at Eli when they went past her. “Okay Eli, don’t freak out”, she thought.

“Excuse me? Hello, I am lost… What is going on?” she asked a marsupilami.

    Without answering, he took her through the city by the hand to the Town Hall. The mayor was standing in front of the door and looked like a dog. Frightened, Elizabeth went on to the building were the mayor was. In fact, it was the mayor’s marsupilami wearing his clothes.

“Oh, Miss Brown, pleased to meet you!”, he exclaimed. “Don’t be scared, I will not hurt you.”

    The woman was more than surprised.  It was the first time she had heard an animal talk. It -- or rather he, because it was like a human now -- had a deep voice, but soft and reassuring according to Elizabeth. As he saw she looked lost, the marsupilami offered Eli a conversation in the mayor’s office.

The discussion took about an hour. Meanwhile, the marsupilami who had introduced himself as John, informed the red-haired lady about the changes which had lately taken place. He owned up to the brownie story. The marsupial scientists had discovered a strange chemical reaction in their brains. Having eaten Mars brownies, they were more intelligent and John was the most intelligent of them all. He explained for the enslavement of humans too. Elizabeth Brown had been spared because she was the one who made the precious brownies.  

    Once it was all over, he let her go. She was free but under watch and had to make Mars brownies and that was it. Had she not been scared and known how to poison them, she would have done it. The thing was she was scared and she did not know how to. As she liked making brownies she was quite happy. But she went West when she turned 96 with her secret recipe. Nobody knows if the marsupilamis still run Mars or if humans have rebelled.

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