Ateliers écritureS en Anglais

Into the world - WINNER group A

Publié le samedi 21 janvier 2017 15:32 - Mis à jour le mercredi 5 juillet 2017 19:42

Three years ago, I went to Peru for 2 months with my friend, Albert, a scientist specialized in precious stones. I went to this country to find new species of snakes.

After two weeks, Albert felt sick from an unknown disease and he had to stay in the farm where we were sleeping. I decided to continue our researches alone so I went in the nearby forest. After a day of walk, I was very tired and I wanted to find a place to sleep a little. Miraculously, I found a cave in the half-light. I went in and saw a well : I was very thirsty. I walked in the cave to drink the well's water. I walked close to the well, leaned above the well and suddenly, I fell, screaming a lot, and finally touched the ground.


I opened my eyes and stayed stupefied : I had never seen a place like this before. There was some vegetation with colorful trees, they were blue, pink, red, yellow with a lot of shades. Flowers sang with a sweet voice.

I tried to take my camera but it was broken. I was afraid but astounded. I decided to walk to visit this beautiful place. After a few minutes of walk, I saw a beautiful black snake with big green eyes. I had never seen this snake before and I was very happy to see this but my sublime black beauty was locked in a glass cage and I wanted to free it.I decided to throw my bag on the cage and it broke up the glass.

Suddenly, life stopped. Trees lost their colors, flowers stopped singing, all the beautiful things of this unknown world disappeared. At the same time, fairies came and took my arms. I was so shocked : fairies existed and I couldn't believe that was true. I ran with one of the fairies but I didn't know where I was going. I saw in her eyes that she was afraid. Her eyes were blue like a saphire and she also had long red hair. We arrived in a wood house which was very well decorated with a lot of flowers and unknown objects. The beautiful fairy who ran with me told me :

« -Who are you?! You're crazy ?! Where do you come from ?!

-I'm...Josh...a biologist specialized in the study of snakes »

She continued with a lot of fear in her voice : « Are you...a human ? « 

I answered yes and asked her about where we were. She told me that we were in Pandora, a world into my world. It was a planet which was created by fairies in the middle of the Earth because in a distant time, humans killed fairies because they believed that fairies were the incarnation of evil in the world. On this planet, they could live together safely. She explained to me that the balance of their world was defined by balance of the good and the bad. The white snake was the good part of the world, it did all the good and beautiful things on the planet, but there was an other snake : the black snake. My black beauty was the bad one, and suddenly I realized that I had released the evil snake, who was locked up to maintain peace and harmony of this unknown world. The fairy woman told me that I had to go see the old white snake at the top of the precious mountain to restore the balance of Pandora. She told me the direction I had to take to go to the mountain.

I started to walk again in this world, but with a different setting. It was not the beautiful one I'd seen before, it was so sad. I succeeded in reaching the mountain and I saw an old and beautiful white snake that seemed to waken. I walked close to him and he looked at me with a lot of kindness before telling me :

« - I know who you are and I know what you did. You can repair your errors and make this world a new world. You will be my heir. »

I did not understand : « -You don't know me and I can't be your heir... 

« -Of course you are. I've been waiting for you for a long time, and now, it's your turn to make the good of Pandora. »

Without being able to say a word, a white light blinded me and the snake disappeared. I wanted to repair the mistake I had made and make this world as beautiful as it was when I got there so, I returned to the first place that I saw in this world to fight with the bad snake.

I arrived behind it and when I approached it, it strengthened considerably. I heard a very powerful cry, wind was blowing, and the sky had turned black. When I opened my eyes again, the scenery had become peaceful again. All the fairies thanked me and cheered me. I closed my eyes to celebrate my victory and a voice called me very strong.

That's how I became the purity of Pandora.

 

Written by Inès, Flavy, Elona and Servane

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